Plans for editing

In the editing I need to change when the Bjork song finishes in the titles as it ends too soon, this was my initial intention to have it like this so that the sounds of the waves fade in for the final title however this wasn't effective and most people it more distracting that intriguing. Also the titles are too long overall for the type of project and seem rather pretentious when put next to the short film.

In the main scene that I have filmed, I need to have more close ups and 'coverage' of the scene to make more sense of story. I wanted to have longer drawn out shots, in the style of Sam Mendes in American Beauty when he just points the camera at the scene and lets the actors do there thing. This doesn't work in my film as there is no character interaction in the scene so the audience needs something to watch.

I am going to reshoot some of the scene i had already done and will shoot the next scene the next time I meet up with my actor. It is hard to timetable there schedule with mine and another schedule of another actor.